As graphic Designer and logo maker (sorry I'm French, I do my best with English) :
It's pretty cool, love the illustration BUT, a logo must be really really simple because it as to be readable in very tiny. That's why an illustration can't be a "good" logo, because it's too complex to be readable in tiny. It also need to be usable in black and white version (and it help with accessibility too).
That's why designing a logo is very long and complicated because you need to tell much information with the simplier design.
And the Font have to change, don't know how.... but it doesn't match I think. Maybe something more... mecanical ? Or Cubic ? So much things to try. But something simple, readable, with personnality.
