Something is off...

[Panzervim]

Love the parts individually, but together? They don't seem to mesh.

[CABLES]

i see where you're coming from. i think it's the angle of the lower roof and the catwalk clashing with the upper roof. try building them at a steeper angle to match the upper roof's.

[Maelstrom]

The catwalk seems too big.   Additionally the railing color is out of place.  either use acacia or something contrasting to the roof color.

[Panzervim]

5 hours ago, Maelstrom said:

The catwalk seems too big.   Additionally the railing color is out of place.  either use acacia or something contrasting to the roof color.

I appreciate the advise, it is a bit too big. For the railing color, I just never crossed acacia in my world and I build stuff here to later add to the survival world so I won't be able to do that unfortunately. Ty for the input!

[Panzervim]

6 hours ago, CABLES said:

i see where you're coming from. i think it's the angle of the lower roof and the catwalk clashing with the upper roof. try building them at a steeper angle to match the upper roof's.

I'll try that! I'll also try the inverse where I make the upper roof flatter like the bottom. Ty for the input!

[Maelstrom]

14 hours ago, Panzervim said:

I appreciate the advise, it is a bit too big. For the railing color, I just never crossed acacia in my world and I build stuff here to later add to the survival world so I won't be able to do that unfortunately. Ty for the input!

Acacia is a southern wood, so you have to go thousands of blocks to get it unless you spawn in a warm or hot climate zone.  Given that your build is in creative though, just need to pull the block out of the palette.

Edited November 26, 2025 by Maelstrom

[fluffydragon]

maybe bring out the sails a little be too?